近期为一知名汽车公司提供了一份笔译，后来他们提交了一份由外国专家做的翻译修订稿。现对这份稿子总结如下：
一、翻译的地道性问题
即使是资深翻译专家，也会出现用词不地道现象，毕竟不是母语啊。摘举几个例子说明：
1.创造了中国汽车行业一个又一个奇迹
原稿：has created many miracles one after another in China automobile industry
修订稿：was the major player of Chinese automobile industry
专家建议：miracle不适合用在这里，建议用major player
2. 烟台在中国胶东半岛上焕发着青春的活力
原稿： Yantai shines with the vitality of youth in the Jiaodong Peninsula in China
修订稿：Yantai thrives with the vitality of youth in the Jiaodong Peninsula of China
3.从此，黄海之滨崛起了一座汽车新城。
原稿： Hence, there is a new auto center along the coast of the Yellow Sea.
修订稿：Hence, a new auto center appeared by the coast of the Yellow Sea.
4.该车间包括前处理、中涂和面漆等涂装生产线，使用全自动进口喷涂设备
原稿：It includes paint production lines of pre-treatment, medium coating and top coating, etc. and uses full automatic imported spraying equipment.
修订稿：Coating production lines of pre-treatment, medium coating and top coating, etc. are installed and the full automatic imported spraying equipment are used.
5.所有零部件最终在这里组装成整车驶下生产线。
原稿： All parts are assembled here into whole vehicle to get off the production line.
修订稿：All parts are assembled here and roll off the production line.
6.其热加工业务在国内整车合资企业中是绝无仅有的。
原稿：Its thermal processing business is the only one among joint ventures of whole vehicle in China.
修订稿：For all the Chinese joint ventures, it is the only one which can do this business.
